Dab O Ink Challenge " " First love- First Kiss

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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

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0 posted 2001-11-30 04:25 PM

I was young...more than most
when I swear I saw my very first ghost
not in haunting fearsome dream
but a shade of my heart's true dream
I loved her from the moment met
and even now...still love her yet
her eyes that smile and laugh and frown
the grace she holds in jeans or party gown
her hands that healed and gave reproach
the young girl...both friend and coach
she kissed me..right there on my lips
tapped my nose with fingertips
' I'll see you again...some sweet day
so goodbye to you I will not say '
years went by..some fair some cold
and with the years my memories old
and then I met her...once again
though in truth I knew not my friend
She pestered me..with smiles..and more
her adoration I knew not what for
and I almost banished her, to my shame
so I promised never to use her name
our lives...are not the same it seems
and sometimes my ghost...of her I dream
but true to her word she loves me still
and in my heart I always will
cherish her
more than most
first love, first kiss,
to my friend
the ghost.

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

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Missouri

1 posted 2001-11-30 04:33 PM

OOoooh I really do like this!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-12-02 11:52 AM

SolticeSon~
This is MARVELOUS ~

Thank you sooooooo much for participating~
I'm a happy camper ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise

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3 posted 2001-12-02 06:43 PM

So sweet, Sol!

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

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4 posted 2001-12-03 03:11 PM

Songbird...OOOooooooh! You're welcome

Marge...no no no...thank YOU

Denise...Thanks...I had fun...mixing truth with fiction on this one

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-12-04 09:08 PM

*sigh* it is just to good It makes me swoon

great job

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

6 posted 2001-12-05 03:35 PM

~ waves a bit o smellin salts for Suz ~ Thanks...~ blushes ~ Thank you very much

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04

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Clio, MI , United We Stand

7 posted 2001-12-06 10:00 PM

Sol....

How sweet and touching this is....

Best

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

8 posted 2001-12-07 08:11 AM

Bestgirl???!!!! Yiles....its been ages....thanks for reading and leavin a note

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

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