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Changing Seasons
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Changing Seasons |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Changing Seasons Roses sing rhyme Violets speak blue A flower is the time A growing time to love you But you are the flowers of earth's colourful glove A world of beauty a growing love Spring is the season that shows how true The birth of love for me and you Summer is the warmth that sparks our touch The heat of lovemaking we burn so much A burning flame that scorches our souls An affection so hot it burns off our clothes Autumn is happiness that brings us joy A child is born, a beautiful baby boy He gives us strength as we move through life Set free he shows us his love flower a wife Winter is coldness telling us he is gone Chills of our grown baby a presence we long Spring returns with our boy and his wife Changing seasons they bring a baby girl into our life |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sweet song, bro of James. Corinne |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
insect.... our lives really do change with the seasons.... Very nice writing here! ~~To live...is to give~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ Such a sweet, sweet song of the changing seasons of lives. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Insect, Your song is a melody to my ears. Very nice writing. What an ending!!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A burning flame that scorches our souls An affection so hot it burns off our clothes WOW! Then follwed by a very sweet and tender weave.....fantastic imagery, I enjoyed it very much! Great writing~ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Corinne…Thank you so much Very sweet of you to reply! Sunny1…Thanks very much Change can be a wonderful thing! Nature always has a way sooner or later. Marge Tindal…Thank you Marge You always have such kind words! Lone Wolf…Thank you How sweet you are to say these nice words! And thanks for the smile!! Butterflies_don't_cry…Thank you You are just beautiful! You must have been one gorgeous caterpillar! Sorry for the delay my sweet poet friends so here is a big smile for all of ya's  |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Insect this was very beautiful! Our lives are forever changing just like the seasons. I loved this one alot! kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Thank you kat You give me a smile every time you reply to me Mmmmmmmm! |
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