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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-06-26 06:13 PM


For Jenn....

She has the frantic heart,
That one that keeps me,
Caress' me to passion
Falling to my knees.
She has the frantic heart,
One that wishes to feel,
To be held and loved
What more desires behold.
She calls from distant lines,
Across an electronic age,
With her soul and her flame
To touch me, to understand.
We two, who have been lost,
Comfort one another in ways,
Ways that cannot be witheld
Nor most understood.
She has the frantic heart,
The one that needs my parts
My soul and being collapse,
The journey begins at last.



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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-26 06:41 PM


What more desires behold.
She calls from distant lines,
Across an electronic age,
With her soul and her flame
To touch me, to understand.
We two, who have been lost,
Comfort one another in ways,
Ways that cannot be witheld
Nor most understood.
She has the frantic heart,
The one that needs my parts
My soul and being collapse,
The journey begins at last.
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*sigh*
this is beautiful...
and i relate to this ones emotions well
cool title too
great writing
jm

baby dont you work so hard
for this prize you've found,
it will all be gone-when you turn around,
cause nothing lasts forever anyway.
Rick Roberts

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