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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 2000-06-24 09:55 PM


Enchanted woman, you lure me in
you capitvate all that I am

Enchanted woman, your eyes filled with sin
forgetting now just who I am

Enchanted woman, you beckon to touch
and learn without seeing a thing

Enchanted woman, I'm drinking too much
and courage is what it will bring

Enchanted woman, your pouty red lips
all glossed and making me think

Enchanted woman, you're swaying your hips
approaching, you're right on the brink

Enchanted woman, your shiny dark hair
so perfect with sensual scent

Enchanted woman, your naughty girl stare
you're succeeding to make me relent

Enchanted woman, we're gonna remember
what happens throughout this wild night

Enchanted woman, I'm starting to render
a picture my mom wont delight   < !signature-->

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.






[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 06-24-2000).]

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-24 10:07 PM


at that last line...good work, Thunderkyss.

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



ThUnDeRkYsS
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2 posted 2000-06-26 12:44 PM


Thank you Elizabeth  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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3 posted 2000-06-26 12:48 PM


ThUnDeRkYsS~
Enjoyed the tempo of this one.
~*Marge*~



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ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 2000-06-26 06:08 PM


Thank you much Marge   {{H}}
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