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Loves' Flame of Eternity
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Loves' Flame of Eternity |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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You, me, Hot flame, Burning, fire, Desire, to admire, Unquenchable, Tangled, mangled, Entwined, wrapped, One, Inside the other, Lover, hotter, Kisses smother, Breath, heavy, Heavier, Sweat dripping, Lips kissing, Hissing, motion, lotion, massage, comotion, ocean, waves, Wet, slpash, bodies rolling, Heartbeating, fast, faster, harder, harder, I'm breathing, all of you, All of me, Lock and key, Loves' burning flame, Flame of eternity. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-18-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Whoa there!!!  How has this been here so long without a response? Dynamite writing, romantic one. Frenzied words told in a frienzied pace makes it very hard-hitting, not to mention HOT STUFF!!!! oops.... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
thank you sweet Balladeer! Hot!!!!I am hot here!!!whew!!!must be the heat!!!I wrote it passionately, as fast as I could!  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well I had something to say, but I think I'll just hold my breath....then take a cold shower. Oh, I think I'll read it again, and again and again, and again. Parker |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Parker your replies are always appreciated |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of romance and wanting and needing...and even some kissing...loved the intensity of this poem. James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I loved the way you composed and arranged this piece...great job, and the poem well, it very, very romantic! Nathan |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks James and Nate!!!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is steaming!!! I think a WARNING was in order Wonderful writing and thank you for sharing this~ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Love is Hot I'm melting inside The crystal is liquefied Warmth becomes heat Heart starts to beat Heat sparks a flame Flame burns untamed Beats pump strong Little kisses become long Long luscious licks Tasting, biting Tongues fighting Swallowing Devouring Two become one Love is hot as the sun |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
LOL! yes butterfly you are right! Thanks for your comments!I added an icon to this reply to help...lol!Shew! Insect....I believe your name should be Spanish fly..hehe! woooo!!!!HOT,HOT,HOT! I am melting too!!!!!!!!(Takeing a shower under a waterfall).... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh you little deviless you! motion, lotion, massage, commotion, Whew, you got'em going this time! Great words! |
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Sigmund Freud Junior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 38Come to my couch... |
Hmmmm, its even shaped like a cigar. A very hot cigar I might add. Freud |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Loved the content and the construction. Makes me want to take a long lunch and go visit someone close. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
OMG!!! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
btw... I liked. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ARH~ girl!! Whooo! You're gonna set this place on fire! Loved the intensity..... way to go!  - SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Phewww!!!!.... Hope my monitor is fire proof, I loved it Thanks Olias |
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sleepless Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 13 |
What else can I say, that everyone else hasn't? Your passion is intense, your emotions are clear, the way you can relate that on paper is truely a gift. Great Job!!!!! looking forward to more. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Ethome...oh my deviless, lol! cute! I am frisky you know!haha! Sig...ha!ha! you must be Bill Clinton undercover! lol! Love cigars do ya!!! Mark Thank you for your words of inspiration! Olias...hehe..fireproof...good one...Check your manual! Mike thanks for two replies! Sea..you are funny, is there anything called internet firemen? LOL! Sleepless... Thanks for your words! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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Sigmund Freud Junior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 38Come to my couch... |
Yes, I'm really smoken undercover, would you like to try my big cigar....lol Freud |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Sounds ummm interesting Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whew! Very Hot! Well done! Denise |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Supernova Love is hot as the sun Sweat begins to run Pleasure is pure Bodies steaming shower Evaporating together Condensing with eternity Lovemaking purity Supernova spasm sorry got carried away [This message has been edited by insect (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Couldn't be any hotter or it wouldn't be in open....very intense.....described this act of LOVE well.... great job....Julie :) |
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