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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
PORTRAIT OF AN ANGEL Hair Soft and flowing Touch like silk upon my skin Eyes Grey and knowing Saying so much and glowing They speak to me Say "come to me, I love you" And begin To tell the story of an Angel An angel from above An angel who is mine alone To have And hold And love Ears So soft and tender And waiting for my voice To whisper "Angel, I am yours " And wanting me to kiss them To feel my lips and teeth As you begin to sense that feeling Which grows so deep beneath Face With skin that looks so young It needs a kiss A touch I want it neath my fingertips And lips I want that Oh, So much Mouth Smiling Oh so sweet Those lips that press to mine The tongue and teeth contained within A taste of angel wine They brush against They stroke and bite As passion starts to fill The whole of me I feel the need To hold you And I will And that neck So beautiful It cries to be caressed And kissed and stroked For hours Such Joy To feel so blessed Shoulders smooth and graceful Lead to arms which hold me tight I feel their hold Around me Each day And all the night Then hands With fingertips that touch So light And sometimes firmly too They always bring me exstacy As only Angels do That back! The look The feel The shape Of Angel Down to hips That back, it needs my willing hands It wants my eager lips You turn I see those lovely breasts Which lay so soft and warm A place to put my head to hide A shelter from the storm And yet As you start to come awake Those breasts feel so alive Not just a hiding place but now A place where loving thrives And down To a middle My favourite place To wrap my arms around To pull you close To melt in you Such heaven I have found And round those hips My glance it strays To thighs Quite strong And legs So long No matter how many night or days Should pass I'll never tire Of this wonderful journey of delight This journey of desire To calves And ankles Feet and toes (I want to kiss each one of those) Before I start to find My way back up To that special place You thought I'd left behind And as I touch her Honey flows To welcome each caress I want to touch To kiss To taste To make her want me so That she simply can't resist me She couldn't utter "No" Instead she calls me "Come to me, come give yourself, your all" "I need to feel you touching me" My body heeds the call Then soon we are together Inside you I'm relieved That heaven's found me I'm home at last Now truly I believe And later Holding Touching Kissing Looking at that face The feeling of contentment That I am in my place How did this angel get to earth? And why did she pick me? I once was trapped Inside myself But now With You I'm free |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...truly an angel I would love to meet...and get to know a little better...James |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
I'm afraid you have no chance James... This Angel is mine alone!! Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
I LOVED THIS ONE!!!!! lol....uhmmm...letme calm down a bit and just say "great piece..." chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Glad you like it Chris She's even better in the flesh y'know!! Thank you for you kind words. Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh,,wow! very sensual!!!!Passionate, but tender!!! Romantic! beautiful!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH MAN... *sigh* BIG OLD *SIGH* ok...*breathing* again *smile* breathtaking portrait you have penned here perfection...poetry in motion take care jm |
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ynotme? Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 17 |
Notlikely2.....your angel sounds rather familiar......do I know her....or is it just wishful thinking????? Very well written anyway...so passionate and yet so caring....you are very lucky... |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Thanks again people.. It's so gratifying to know that "My" Angel, can have this effect on others as well as myself!! Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That is one of the most beautiful sensual descriptions of love making that I have read for a long time. To be able to maintain the beauty of the intimacy throughout is quite a skill. Very well done!!! |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Thank you...but to be honest...I had a lot of help with this one. When you make love with an angel, it is easy to become poetic! Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
A true gentleman .... wounderous poetry, I am glad you have found something so special and joyous, a club I want to breack into but never seem to get the chance, ahh well, maybe I'll see you on the inside of the circle someday, for now I'll just be jealous of your writeing talent and your happyness . One of the best poems I have read in a while . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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