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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-06-16 08:49 AM


Inspiration

I’ve given thought to human minds
The rich aesthetic gifts it finds
The products of our own creation
Born of inspiration

Who brings the mountain waters out
From where do words of wisdom spout
What spring pours forth imagination
The font of inspiration

From where do poet juices flow
Their place of origin unknown
Ideas are not made out of ink
And pens know not to think

Some say there is a poet’s muse
A little myth that some confuse
With poet’s pure imagination
Born of inspiration

A simple sunflower may inspire
A painting to be long admired
Sometimes a great imagination
Is simple inspiration

As for me, my verse comes from
The dreams I’ve dreamed, the deeds I’ve done
The love I’ve given and received
And that which I believed

Imagination plays a part
But inspiration’s from the heart
For if you’re always true to self
A poet’s muse is just himself

But now and then one might concede
The value of a sunflower seed

Elizabeth Santos




[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 06-16-2000).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-06-16 09:03 AM


Imagination plays a part
But inspiration’s from the heart
For if you’re always true to self
A poet’s muse is just himself

But now and then one might concede
The value of a sunflower seed
....... WOW, WOW, WOW .......

An artist is by his subject, inspired,
A poet by a mere thought,
A devotee is by God Himself, inspired,
Life's many a battle fought.

People from a kingdom majestic, inspired,
by the Emperor so noble, so fair
'Tis a pleasure ultimate to be inspired,
What pleasure it must be for its source, rare.
......

look what you inspired Liz, and you are an inspirational source so rare...

regards, sudhir

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-06-16 09:03 AM


Hi Liz,

Good morning, this is wonderful, someone told me they hoped I never got published because then the whole world would know of me personally, I think the truth about life should be told, maybe its done in a form of poetry but its based in fact for the most part. As far as sunflowers I have about forty of them just about ready to transplant in to my garden, I can't wait to see them all bloom and this poem I shall remmeber when I see them.

Love, Cerenity

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-06-16 09:04 AM


From the land of sunflowers, I salute you, and this fine piece of work!  Well said!

Hugs to you and Tony...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Elizabeth
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4 posted 2000-06-16 12:12 PM


I love these lines:

"Imagination plays a part
But inspiration's from the heart"

Good work again Elizabeth.

Elizabeth


 I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



LoveBug
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5 posted 2000-06-16 12:55 PM


Liz, this is a beautiful work! It's one of my favorites from you. I especally love the lines:

"For if you’re always true to self
A poet’s muse is just himself"

Thank you for sharing this with us!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Honeybee
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6 posted 2000-06-16 01:04 PM



Liz, this is one of my favourite poems by you.  Being a true sunflower lover, I loved how you integrated the beauty of a sunflower in your poem.  Very well said and poignant!  I hope that all poets read this gem!  All verses are perfect, but...

My favourite verses are:

"A simple sunflower may inspire
a painting to be long admired
sometimes a great imagination
is simple inspiration"

"Imagination plays a part
but inspiration's from the heart
for if you're always true to self
a poet's muse is just himself"

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-16-2000).]

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
7 posted 2000-06-16 02:37 PM


But now and then one might concede
The value of a sunflower seed

inspirational...sorry bad joke.

I’ve given thought to human minds
The rich aesthetic gifts it finds
The products of our own creation
Born of inspiration

From where do poet juices flow
Their place of origin unknown
Ideas are not made out of ink
And pens know not to think


wow an excellent poem from a poet who is an inspiration to us all.
  



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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde


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Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2000-06-16 04:21 PM


Elizabeth,
To me you are an inspiration
You and all these sweet quotations.
And I would say to you once more,
Your poetry I do adore.
Love Sy

ESP
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9 posted 2000-06-16 04:27 PM


Liz, I don't know how to word what I want to say about this poem. So I will simply  
Love to you and Tony.

Love and hugs,
Lil' Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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