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~*Sunrise Of Hope Haiku*~
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~*SUNRISE OF HOPE HAIKU*~ 5-7-5 Glorious sunrise filling the heart with promises warms the day with hope *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a wonderful haiku, you would not believe that I was trying to count the syllables to see how a haiku is written. I wish I was joking but I am not. I think I will stick to free form. LOL ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your haikus always work for me! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ this is so bright! Loved it!  -SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Brian: Haikus are more difficult to write than everyone thinks, I agree with you! Keep praticing though, I am sure that your haikus will be brilliant in time. For some reason, Haikus, senryus andtankas come easy to me, but, believe me, when I first started, they were difficult to not only do the correct syllable count, but to say something of value or intelligent with a unique twist in only a few words. Thank you for your endless support! You're always one of the first poets to reply to my haikus  Sunshine and Sea - Thank you, your poems are always top notch! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
smiles across the miles |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, Your "Sunrise" is as brilliant as usual! Your talent SHINES! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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