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~*Autumn Kisses Haiku*~
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~*Autumn Kisses Haiku*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Maybe soon, I'll write a haiku about Summer  ~*AUTUMN KISSES HAIKU*~ 5-7-5 Autumn breezes in blowing kisses to the leaves dancing with oak trees *By Melissa Honeybee* [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
summer is misery yes! i hate mowing lots! sweaty shirt in the hamper... good lil haiku..by you |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
WAY TO GO! Melissa unfolds Autumns magical love story Dancing across screen You go girl!..................Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
One day I'll learn Haiku until then I am feeling so blue. ok I really have no idea how to write a haiku tell me if I am close. A wonderful haiku. < !signature--> ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating ----- [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Walt, Dennis and Brian for your kind replies. Walt-It's been so hot here, I'm starting to hate summer, wishing for Autumn or Spring, I agree with you Dennis - What a lovely haiku that you wrote for me. Thanks! You are so good at haikus my friend Brian - I am sure that you could write an awesome haiku, you have the talent! The one that you wrote is a little off the 5-7-5 syllable count, with practice you'll get it perfect Take care, Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Look at all the guys Buzzing 'round Honeybee hive Queen Bee ... Melissa ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, I love that haiku! As always, you're so sweet! Yep, boys, I am sweet like honey But, watch it, I also sting! LOL Take care, Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~melissa this is a beautiful haiku, but then again i have come to expect no less from you. your writing is extrodinary take care my friend. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amy, thank you so much for the kind reply and the support! I'm not used to so many compliments Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
"blowing kisses to the leaves" Beautiful |
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