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laryalee
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2000-06-20 08:56 AM


Yesterday afternoon I lost my husband - I had been preparing for two weeks, but it is still so very difficult.  I wrote this yesterday morning....I guess in preparation.  I will be back here after a short break - I need my writing, and I so appreciate the warm welcome I've been given.

_________________________

One coffee cup is so forlorn,
one solitary plate;
the pattern of my life was torn
by somber hands of fate.

A shadow in your vacant chair
is drawn by morning's thread.
I hear the creaking of a stair -
it's only evening's tread.

The arms of emptiness unfold -
I shiver in their grasp;
and muffled heaviness unrolls
its whispers from the past.

Each day I must rebuild anew...
bridge gaps that now exist.
For part of me has followed you
into that great abyss.


© Copyright 2000 Laryalee Fraser - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-06-20 09:13 AM


Laryalee. First I want to express how terribly terribly sorry I am for your loss.

Second - thankyou for choosing to place your trust here with us at Passions. I am sure I speak for all when I say we will honour that.



May I give you many thoughts and hugs.

K

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-06-20 11:43 AM


Laryalee~

I am terribly sorry for your loss.
This brought tears to my eyes...but
I am glad to see you have your writing.
May the good Lord continue to shine
his love on you and you begin to find
a way to mend your broken heart.
Love,
Amy

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




Jan
Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114

3 posted 2000-06-20 04:35 PM


I am so sorry for your loss.  One can never really be prepared for the loss of someone we love.  I pray that God will watch over and comfort you.

Thank you for sharing your poem-I look forward to reading more of your work.

Lonelypoet
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
4 posted 2000-06-20 09:17 PM


Laryalee,
I am sorry for your loss, I hope that you can deal with that big loss. Great Poem.

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