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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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0 posted 2000-10-08 02:41 PM

You confuse me to no end,
my patience is growing rusty.
I'm wishing you could comprehend,
oh it hurts; watching our glowing hearts grow dusty.

And still I have this craving,
to be all that you need.
Yet,is this worth saving?
You're knawing on the hand from which you feed.

It pains me just to see,
what we were just slowly drifts away.
I no longer grasp what you want from me.
What is there that's left to say?

So I ask this of you now,
Will we be able to survive?
Or let us take our final bow,
if we cannot be revived.

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"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-08-2000).]

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-10-08 02:56 PM

Wow..this was great...Keep up the kickin' work!!!!!

~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-08 05:56 PM

great work, glad to have read it. keep it up!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-10-08 06:18 PM

This is really very well written. I love this one. keep it up and keep sharing

thanks for sharing this

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

kutzly
Junior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 17
ohio

4 posted 2000-10-08 06:47 PM

great choice of words i love being able to read poetry and get to know every one.
and by reading yours in a way i know what kind of a person you are
or at least by your poems
peace
me

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2000-10-08 09:58 PM

I liked this poem alot! great job!!

So I ask this of you now,
Will we be able to survive?
Or let us take our final bow,
if we cannot be revived

I loved that part!!!

Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

6 posted 2000-10-08 10:33 PM

wow...this is a really beautiful poem. i hope that everything turns out okay. keep writing

love
Danielle

"I Told Him I Loved Him and the feelings were mutual...He Loved Himself too."

X_me_X
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since 2000-08-18

Posts 37

7 posted 2000-10-08 11:31 PM

hey
i liked ur poem it wus great i can imagine how u mus be feelin all the confusion and things that this persons puttin u thru....
but dun worry everything will be fine it usually worx out 4 da best. jus go wit da flow 4 now.
latez

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2000-10-09 10:06 AM

Excellent Jenn! Great imagery in this piece ... you've expressed yourself well!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

9 posted 2000-10-09 01:19 PM

The flow to this was good. I really like the poem

"And still I have this craving,
to be all that you need."

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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