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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
All in All everythings fine. All in All you are still mine. All in All we're never apart. All in All still close at heart. All in All it never ends. All in All we're still friends. All in All our love will last. All in All the hate has past. Everythings the same there is no wall. And that is that All in All. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the poem was great and your little signature is very interesting, made me crack a cynical smirk at it. All in all, great job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I like!!!  I like the way you used the repetition...Keep up the good work...I hope to see more by you!!!It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
I luvd your poem!!! but I dunno... your quote sounds familiar to me......Nice one!! luvz, VS Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Thanx guys. I didn't think it really had anything, but thanx for showing me differently. As for my signature sounding familiar...I heard one kindof like it, but it was more cheerful, and I was in a gloomy mood, so I revised it. I don't remember know where, but the one you see is mine.   "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I really like this. It's really a different kind of format I've seen. It's really good, so keep it up.  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Great little poem sis...look at me...I'm a senior member now! ain't that cool???? Oh...oops  I guess I'm stealing the glory...great poem..I liked the repitition...see you tomorrow sis! ~*~SCG~*~ p.s. like my new signature? "Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Unknown |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Hey! This is really cute! Keep it up |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
All in all I'd say this is a wonderful peom you've written |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was very good, short and made alot of sence.... Good job. Luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey great poem...you used repetition very well and it fit...those are my thoughts I am buried up to my neck in Contradictionary flies I take pride as the kind of illiterature I'm very ape and very nice -Kurt Cobain |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
All in all, I have to agree with everyone else, you did this one well!!!! I absolutely loved it. Can't wait to see more!! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow this was great!! I loved the repetition, can't wait to see more from u...hasta luego Bel |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
ya'll ain't gonna believe this, but this poem just popped into my head. But anyway all in all thanx for the replies. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
*bump* "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
itchy finger there Sis? Keep bumping up your poems...tsk tsk! LOL J/K  "Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Unknown |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
All in All i just came across this poem and thought it was great keep up the good work "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Well gee ummmmmm....if I hadn't Branden wouldn't have seen it So it's a good thing I did huh! "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
WELL all in all it was beauty in it's best form a single flower holds more beauty the the hole bouque because it is the flower that catches that persons eye I love the flower but there is a thorn by the rose so all in all I liked it.  early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, but socially dead. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey** This was very cute..simple but it has alot of meaning and emotion behind it, keep up the great work* ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx jay ur reply means alot to me. thanx DQ Hey now I can tell evryone that I talked to DQ!!!! of course they wouldn't believe me but hey I'll know it. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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