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He Came He left He died............
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He Came He left He died............ |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
He came into this world and was so happy He had 4 girls, one of them had a disability No one knew that I'd have a disability He took care of his girls He loved all of us He came everywhere with me to hospitals One day the doctor told my dad You have Cancer Mikko He was so shoked He told the whole family I didn't understand He undergoed his first surgery It went fine I was scared He went for another surgery Another Another Another As he got weaker I was too In April 1999 Nurses came and talked to him and my mom They asked him questions that hurt me I wanted to cry I cryed and went into my room Seeing your best friend dying So then came my 1st prom He said you look pretty I said thank you dad It became the end of school I asked this guy out He said yes I was happy and My dad was happy also We went on vacactions But he was so sick He didn't care about his cancer He cared that my sister and the family had fun It became beging of school Months Past In December I went to bed The next thing I knew My younger sister was crying I said whats wrong? She said dad is going to hospital I cryed.. I went to visit him I cryed Just sat there looking at him I went to the hospital until Wednesday Then my pastor told me your dads going to die I didn't face my father that day The next day I didn't go to the hospital He was sad because I wasn't there He looked around at people In his room Took one last breath Closed his eyes.. Passed on to heaven.. (C) Min Talviharju RIP Mikko Talviharju Feb-21-54 to Dec-23-99 I miss you dad  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I have seen many who have lost their father...I am so grateful I have not been one of them...If you ever need to talk pelase don't hesitate to e-mail me carl2lee@hotmail.com ok? touching piece of work you have here... ~Carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
The loss of a loved one is always very devastating. Just know that your dad is no longer in pain girl! I know how much it hurts and how lonely days can be. Do not worry, you will see him again someday, and the two of you will always be best friends. Keep your head up girl! < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. How are you doing?? It's been a while! Hit me up girl! You know the e-mail address. ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
The closest person to me lost was a close friend...When family died I was to little to realize what was going on...The pain is unbearable at times...But you gotta stay strong...Never forget that your dad is watching over you...Everything you do he is by your side helping you...He is in a better place now... Keep up the good work... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i empathize with you greatly. you have conveyed your thoughts into words very well. i can not say much about death, as i have no personal experience with being dead, but i have seen some bad things in my time. i've experienced some bad things. things that have no origins other than the depths of hell. if there's a hell, then there's gotta be a heaven. there's gotta be. i hope you continue being brave. good luck to you and your family. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
what a said poem I'm sorry to hear about your father. well keep up the great work and I hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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