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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Don't take advantage of my depression For my tears will break your heart Don't tell me that you love me I'll rip your words apart Don't try to understand me For no one ever will Don't look into my eyes My empty stare will give you chills Don't tell me not to fear Nothing's gonna be okay When I scream at you to leave me Please don't go away... Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Whoa, this seems familiar…oh wait! Like I said, it’s kinda depressing (Wait, viva la revolution!). Yummy, but has a bitter aftertaste…hehe, good work, Laters…. --- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Was this good!!!I really do like it...WOW... When I scream at you to leave me Please don't go away... I know exactly how you feel when you put that...Keep up the good work!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
i really like this poem, although it is very sad! it touched me. the last line is gr8!! luv ya Jo. xoxox * I am in love.... and loving it.... i suggest you try it* :) |
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