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If (I don't know anymore) |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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If there is a reason, I'm sure you'll let me know. If there is a purpose, of why you had to go. You know I'll never understand, but I guess that's okay. I think about you a lot, you say likewise, same way. I think that you're affraid, of what you will be. And I know eventually, you'll be affraid of me. But I'm scared of the world, sometimes I want to hide. And never come out, unless you're in my life. You don't know how I feel, you just don't understand. You say you're not a baby, you don't need to hold my hand. If you have something to say, just tell me how you feel. And just maybe I'll tell you, my feelings that are real. ---------------------------------------------------- Hey all! Did you all see Eminem on the VMA on MTV???? He rocked the house!!! He raised the roof!!! Yeah Baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANd today my life got a bit more complicated. I wrote Justin a letter for D to give him today, so I \don't know what will happen. Anyways, there is this guy that I liked for two and a half years, and well, he was a jerk to me, but now he's being sweet. He found a note to my bud Lauron, from me, and he could have read it and passed it around and stuff, but he gave it back. Maybe there is a break through in jerkyness for him. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Allysa~~~This is really good!!!Did you write this for Justin???Well I wish you the best of luck with the other guy!!!And keep up the good work...  By the way what does D mean??? As you put it here: I wrote Justin a letter for D ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
ERIN: thanks for replying. umm, D is my friend, I just call her D for no particular reason. umm, the justin thing is still weird, don't know what's goin' on. umm, the other guy is haveing a break through from his jerkiness, to his other, nicer, more civilized side, and possibly letting me have a chane to be a friend. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
So if you have a crush on this other guy tell him how you feel. Maybe he was being a jerk cause he liked you. You never know unless you try!!!Keep us posted!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good work, here! I missed Eminem, I heard he was hot. Good luck with the guy... sometimes jerks pull a 180. Jenn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey the poem was great. I liked it a lot. In fact, i just like how you write. Do you have any other poems that do not pertain to love , life and so on? maybe about something odd? like.....a fork? i dont know..... haha ignore me great job! BYE!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
ERIN:I'm pretty sure he doesn't like me like that anyways. I wrote justin a note and he told my friend to through it away, why won't he just listen to me. He knows I can't say things, I have to write them down. If he don't talk to me soon, m,y cousin is gonna have to become a stalker> Jenn: Thanks for replyin'. Eminem was soooo hot on MTV. He sang The Real Slim Shady, and The Way I Am. And he won two awards(I think) and co-won an award with Dr.Dre. Awesome!!!! Dopey: Thanks for replyin'. I'm glad you like my poems. no I don't write about forks, but I could try if you wanted me to. My poems pertain to love and all that because that's what I'm goin' through with Justin right now. Bye Bye. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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