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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Join Me It's so gloomy and painful, isn't it, when you look upon the past? The undying souls of regret live on, while the glory of love didn't last. The trail behind seems so short to me if you look beyond the now. Those days were just the time to learn and get to here some how. So here we are, at the crossroad of your life and of mine. Would you prefer to venture on alone or have me at your side? Join me now and we'll move on though all we've yet to see. Join me now and cast regret and fear like stones upon the sea. Jeremy D. Halstead "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." [This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremy! my dear, what a wonderful poem that you've written for me! haha j/k!  You know I love ya! As Always a wonderful piece, and with such beautiful sentiments who could resist?!!? you're awesome dewd! Love ya bunches!! Love Always~*~Jess Girl~*~~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hmm... I was the fist one to reply!! hahah how do you liek them apples eh?!?!?!!? Hehehe I feel special! you know, your comment about me being "Loco" was most inspiring considering the fact that if I wasn't before, I am now! hehe. And just so you know, I'm a girl! It's Loca! hehe. ok talk to you laters! ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
You are so friggin talented! I really like this poem, it just works, ya know? I'm very impressed. Rock and roll! *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jeremy~~~Jessica is thinking that just cuz she was #1 and 2 to your replies she is special!!!j/p Hey I am happy taking #4...You are very talented...As you amaze me more and more with this good poetry...I cant wait to see more of it!!!Keep up this beautiful work buddy!!! Love Always DQ (DQ=For drama queen) Oh and Jessica is CDQ or PDQ which ever you choose!!!LOL< !signature--> ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
ok sorry to take up so much room, but for some reaason, Erin thinks she's funny!! And I'm about ready to open a can on her ass. hehe j/k you know I love you girl. And Jeremy, now look, not only do I have 1 and 2, I have 5 too!!!!! Muahhahahaahaha I'm soo funny. Love ya kid!! Love Always~*~Jess~*~ or in Erin's point of view, CDQ! hehe. ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jeremy~~~Jessica just wants all the attention!!!LOL Shes just mad cuz I am DQ and she has to be CDQ...Shes just making up reasons to post more replies to this poem...And you know what shes not sorry cuz she keeps taking up more and more room...She really is crazy!!!But see I still love her cuz she needs special attention...(She really isnt crazy though...Maybe just psycho)...LOL |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Erin and Jess ~ Woaa...hold your horses ladies. If anyone's special, it's me j/k Jeremy ~ Since you did right this, I gotta say it's pretty awesome. I was afraid you quit writing for a while since I haven't seen ya here, but awesome work! Keep at it, we love em! quote--------------------------------- "It's so gloomy and painful, isn't it, when you look upon the past? The undying souls of regret live on, while the glory of love didn't last." -------------------------------------- Those are wonderful words my friend! Salma |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
OK you know what, Erin has some real nerve runnin up here on this territory and dissin people!! And personally, I would rather be a CDQ than just a drama queen! Cuz you are boring so there! hahaha at least I am interesting, crazy people are interesting, you are just a drama queen plain and simple! So I think that you need to get over yourself and quit thinkin you are funny (cuz yer not) and we should probably stop makin people laugh at our petty little fights here. lol Anyways, enough of this girl, you know I love ya bunches and there is no harm, no foul here....right?!?! Have fun and I'll talk to you later~ Love Always ~*~Jess Girl...CDQ~*~ hahaha~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Alright, this is for starpryncess and erin: if this were my poem, I'd be really pissed by now! Just chill, or put everything you've gotta say in one post. Please. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Sorry Lyric I didnt know that you would take this the wrong way...Me and Jessica are both friends with Jeremy...And I dont think that he is to pissed about it...Just be happy this ISNT your poem!!!(and Im not trying to be rude by saying that so dont take it the wrong way)!!! Jeremy~~~I am sorry if I inconvienced you...I really am...If you have a problem with this please tell me!!! < !signature--> ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Jess and Erin.....it's all good, I'm not mad. I think it's cute. Lyric, I do appreciate your concern...thnx for caring. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Join me now and we'll move on though all we've yet to see. Join me now and cast regret and fear like stones upon the sea." This is simply beautiful Jeremy! Wise, and sweetly tender sentiments ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Ok Jer, another great piece from you to display that kick-ass talent of yours, this poem rocks. Jess and Erin, You guys crack me up. What are you guys trying to do here, give Jeremy a head trip? Or just make his head swell by fighting over the attention? I know I love having women fight for my attention...yah right, like that ever happens. have fun!!! jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
So true, so true. Ha. I sound like a philosipher. Anyway, I like this one. It's true, every word. And here's somethin for you to think about. One voice, one simple word, hearts know what to say. One dream can change the world, keep believeing till you find your way. ~David Malloy,Don Cook~ Anyway, great~ And I think that ERIN and Jess(I think that's who) have lost their minds! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
hey jeremy~ this was a great poem~!! i really liked it!! by the way that was s0ome awsome replies by jess shes a goof... i dont know the other one...... hehehe well i gotta go i hope to see you more and i hope that you will sometime read mine!! <~~ that means when i wrote another one!!!! hehehe..... love always netto ~aka~ janette Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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