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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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~~~I know this is short its jsut something off the top of my head and the top of my heart.... I walk down the hall my heart is in my throat i am scared to death that they all know Can they see it in my eyes? all these thoughts im trying to hide or do they hear it when i speak im so afraid i feel like such a geek I dont know what i worry for its not like about me they want to know more So i stop tensing up like a stiff board and i quit acting like such a coward Because they will never know they dont take the time to look inside where the real person grows so they will never see that inside depression is killing me The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jen~~~i love it!!!is this really about you???are you depressed???well keep up the good work!!!i cant wait to read more... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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ShUgArHiGh Junior Member
since 2000-08-24
Posts 24 |
This was a great poem, i loved it! In a weird way this is how i feel inside and i can totally relate to you if your going through this. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a good poem. I can really relate to your feelings in this one. We all get depressed sometimes, but just try to think of all the great things in the world, and you'll cheer up real fast!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey Girl, do not fret! I know how hard it is to live through depression, but I guarantee...at some point things will look up as they should. Keep your head up and if u ever need to talk...I'm here, just e-mail me! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I know the feeling all to well, Jen. Very deep thoughts here. Don't let the demons within you destroy you though...look for the light in everything around you. That's how I got over it. Wonderful work! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so well expressed, I really felt the emotion behind it. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Depression is really killing me so I totally understand your poem.Keep up the awsome work. LAuren |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
I can relate to this, as it is brilliantly expressed..one of the ones that just 'hit you'..keep posting "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Depression will thin out sooner or later, Im sad to hear that you are so sad. Keep pulling through and things should work out, anyways, great piece, good job getting all your emotions out. Love, ~Jeremy~ "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
uch, I know how that goes, oh hell, I'm going through that right now. Well, I can't tell you to cheer up or what not, cuase I know it never works, telling someone to cheer up is like telling them to move a mountian, it just dosn't work; ya have to give them something to get around the mountain. Hope ya get better soon. |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thank you all and i hope your right that ill pull out of this soon its hard but ill live Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~ The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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