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Angel With a Broken Heart Please respond
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Angel With a Broken Heart Please respond |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
"Angel" is what you called me And i still havent figured out why I dont have a halo or wings And from what i know...angels dont cry. Im not anything special I never had anything great to give Except the love that you took for granted The love that taught me how to live If i was such an angel Why did you make me cry? If I was ever so perfect Why did you have to go and lie? In the end I know I will be ok Even though we are now apart I will keep living my life as an angel But I will do it with a broken heart. ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~ *~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~* |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This poem is so nicely written. It makes me wanna say awwwww. You've done a good job. Keep up the work. Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh, this is such a sad piece. I hope that writing this helped your pain a little. Fly on, angel, and find a better one! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i love it!!!this is really good...and you know what i cant wait to see more of your work...having a broken heart can be tough...but we all go through it...its just a consequence of life and love...keep up the good work!!! do you mind if i print this one out??? ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
go ahead and print it! Just remember to give me credit  ) Thank you for all your replys everyone! I appreciate it! ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~ *~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this, I like this a lot. It's written very well, great job! Of course it is sad, but I can still like it, right? |
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