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thug-a-licious Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 27 |
Maybe someday I'll find the one , the one who sweeps me off my feet. The one who cares enough to show it, the one who loves me and truly knows it. The one who takes my heart and handles it with care, the one I know will always be there. The man who makes me smile, the one who makes me cry and I never seem to wonder why. The one who loves me for me , and not someone I used to be. The man who kisses me tenderly . The man who makes life worth while. The one who doesn't make me mad or sad, The one who is sweet but a little bit bad! Maybe someday I'll find a prince, and maybe he'll give me a chance, but it's all wishful thinking and I'm tired of waiting hoping and praying someday my prince will come. Someday I'll find someone and he'll be the one........the one. |
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thug-a-licious Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 27 |
hey yall, i would really appreciate any comments u can give me. Whether they be bad or good just something to help me out with my poetry! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
thug~~~this poem is perfect the way it is...and you know what???eventually one of these days you are gonna find someone that you want...someone just like the poem says... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Meladorri Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 14Indianapolis, IN |
I loved this poem... I looked at this and saw the words of my own heart already written down! I know exactly how you feel... some advice: don't look for "the one" let him find you. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've covered a lot of emotions Thug-a-licious! Nicely done! I like to think that special someone is out there right now, thinking and wondering where "you" are ... just a matter of time till you bump into each other! Till then, keep up the great writing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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