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Teen Poetry #3

The Ring

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-08-18 05:49 PM

I've got his ring,
Around my neck.

And he holds my heart,
In the palm of his hand.

Every day,
I think of him.

I've felt this before,
I think it's called love.

I feel it whne,
He holds me tight.

I lay my head on his chest,
And can feel his heartbeat.

I hold his ring,
Close to my heart.

What's this feeling,
Can it be real?

He's just inched his way,
Deep into my heart.

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.

ValerieB726
Junior Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 14
Louisville,OH, USA

1 posted 2000-08-18 10:09 PM

Very good! I loved this! It showed true feeling! Valerie

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