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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
Isolated and irritated, Some emotional combination to have acquired, Your left alone to think about, The annoyances that have transpired, You just continuously ponder them, Letting the anger or frustraion grow, After it has grown until full term, You bury them deep inside, forgetting you know, As per usual all forgotten things resurface, So buried rocks have been returned, To the predators who prey on the weak, Creating more tragedy to those once burned, People notice and care that it bothers you, But it doesn't stop them from doing it agian, They just reask or do without permission, And hope it turns out akay in the end, No one cares about what you want, No one understands how accidents happen, They just assume your nice and cannot refuse, They cannot comprehend until it happens to them, Alone and hollow down inside, You realize one repetitive thing, It seems you have one good thing to give, Only one good characterisitc to bring, Like a used car you may get fixed, But you could be tampered with or cheated, They may have forgotten a couple parts, But you will never complain about it, You must be sick with a disease, That you know you will never be rid of, It does not matter you'll get used to it, As long as it doesn't float back above, The suggestions you always accept, Are never your personal choice, But even though you may disagree, You never get a strong enough voice, Be like the pirates bottle up the map, If discovered and attempted to find, Your feelings and mind will be so screwed up, The scavengers will be sorry they even tried. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
I'm sorry no one replied to this sooner! This was wonderful. Such power and emotion in it. I really liked it. Keep up the great work!  ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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