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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

0 posted 2000-08-15 07:49 PM


You may have seen this done in other forums, and I'd like to try it here.  This is a challenge to all you teen poets.  Below is a little poem I started one night but just couldn't get anywhere on.  I thought it would be fun to see what all of you could do with it.  So, take it, add to it, end it, use any style and length you want, and be creative!  Please put your poem in a new post with the title followed by "(Lakewalker's Challenge)" so everyone can know what it's about.

Example Subject line:  Falling (Lakewalker's Challenge)

So, here's the beginning, lets see what you can do with this:

Struggling with my answers found
I pick my feet up off the ground
Fighting to accept the truth


[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-15-2000).]

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Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-16 01:35 AM


Can I just post under here??
Let me know cause then I will...

Salooma

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-08-16 10:11 AM


I suppose you can, but more people might see whats going on if there are separate posts.  Do whatever you want though
Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
3 posted 2000-08-16 11:10 AM


okay i attempted your challenge
i wrote it pretty quickly so its not that great!
But check it out!
    
Love ya Bunches
    ~Jen~

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
4 posted 2000-08-16 11:13 AM


Piece of cake, Lakewalker. Have it done in a jiffy!  

stay cool!

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-08-16 04:10 PM


lakewalker~~~i am gonna try but i am not making any promises...ok!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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