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cutie2005
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since 2000-04-30
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Bennett, Colorado USA

0 posted 2000-08-08 03:26 PM


Heres a little story, just about reality..
In it I was taught who to trust or to not, who to like and who to not
But did i learn it...
It starts in the beginng nice and smooth..
I went to the pool with my friend, and things changed right then!
We saw a guy we thought was hot, Though i changed my mind when he asked her for her number instead of mine!
Jelous you might say, well yes you can say
I was mad, and didn't like him right then.
Him and my friend soon hooked up
I gave him durty looks, called him names, and hated everything about him!
I acted like a little kid, kind of making a *****y fool out of myself, with out knowing it!
Things got better I guess you can say, I learnd to like him a little better
but i said it was only for my friends sake
I guess deep down i thought he was alright, not to bad of a person
Out side i would not dare say it, i just kept with the small smiles, and durty looks on the side
After a while my friend and him split
Supposably he was playing her so she had ended it
I don't know what to belive or who to belive or not..
cuz now I like them both
We be came ok friends, he would call me or i'd call him, and we would talk a little.
I would try my best to set him up with friends
I guess you can say he did the same for me
Though at times he can be a real jerk
I wonder and wonder if he had ever kept a girl as a friend before
He knows just the right way to tick one off
but i try not to let it get to me, just in case that is the problem
I ignor it for now, but soon i will say something about it..
I don't know when or what I will say, but it will come out..
For now I do not trust him.
For my best friend I do..
I will keep it that way probably forever, or until my mood will change..



If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
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1 posted 2000-08-08 04:36 PM


cutie~~~this is a good poem/story...it sucks when jealousy comes between 2 friends...it happened between me and my best friend...and it was also over a guy...just dont let guys get between you two...i almost lost my best friend cuz of it...and now i thank god that we are friends again...

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

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