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Euclid the Kid
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon

0 posted 2000-07-29 01:34 PM


If at first she says NO
ask her again and again,
often it's by persistence
defeat can yet yield a win.

If she says,"I'm hurting!"
just hold her in your arms,
words aren't always nedded
to ease the troubled alarms.

If she says , "Slow down, boy
you're moving way too fast."
be kind and considerate
if you want it to last.

If she says, "I like you"
that is an open door,
let her see you at your best--
and she'll like you even more.

If she says, "It's over!"
don't think the world's gonna end,
be grateful for the times you've had
and the freedom to start over again.

© Copyright 2000 Euclid the Kid - All Rights Reserved
sherm
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since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN
1 posted 2000-07-29 02:39 PM


cool poem    i really like what you said there    
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-29 03:41 PM


are you one of those guys that dont give up till you get what you want??? well you sure seem like it...if a girl says no she means it...if a girl says im hurting then she must be...if a girl says slow down then thats what she means...if she said goodbye you must have done something wrong...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-07-29 04:11 PM


Great poem.  That's very true.  This was well written.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-07-29 05:04 PM


Real cute, but don't get over confident that you have solved the mystery of the female mind. Because we can still surprise you.   Peace out, dude.

*~Meredith~*

And now I live
In a world I call my own,
It's always nice when no one's home....
*Lit

Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

5 posted 2000-07-30 04:22 PM


This poem is very peacefully put together.  Keep up the great work.
Kittie



Tara
Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76
Minnesota
6 posted 2000-07-30 05:49 PM


I really liked this poem.  You seem to think you've got us girls figured out, but i like what Meredith had to say.  keep up the good work.  Tara
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