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*prevailing*darkness*
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Port Richey, FL


0 posted 01-03-2001 12:17 PM       View Profile for *prevailing*darkness*   Email *prevailing*darkness*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *prevailing*darkness*

Something so beautiful,
you want to touch it
and hold it.
But once touched
it can NEVER fly again.
It is doomed to death.
Simply because of
one selfish wish,
to touch something
so beautiful
knowing it would end
in destruction,
but taking its life
for one moment of pleasure,
NEVER to fly again...


*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living*

© Copyright 2001 *prevailing*darkness* - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
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since 03-21-2000
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Kansas


1 posted 01-03-2001 01:24 PM       View Profile for Dark_kisses_Within   Email Dark_kisses_Within   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark_kisses_Within's Home Page   View IP for Dark_kisses_Within

HEY Good poem here  
Makes ya think some
about the topic.
(Yes I do think) lol

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

Isis
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2 posted 01-03-2001 08:44 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I always looked on it as precious gift, and the one who 'receives' it must be worthy...
It's a precious gift once touched, forever lost, only the memories remain...
Quite eloquent in a way hon..
isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

*prevailing*darkness*
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3 posted 01-04-2001 01:37 AM       View Profile for *prevailing*darkness*   Email *prevailing*darkness*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *prevailing*darkness*

Thank you both very much. It was something I actually wrote about rape, but I think it came out beautifully... thanks again!

*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living*

Scarlet Lady
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4 posted 01-06-2001 12:33 PM       View Profile for Scarlet Lady   Email Scarlet Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Scarlet Lady

Incredible poem!  One that I shall keep and pass on to those  that need to know how precious their sexual gift is.  Thank you soooooo much for giving us this very special poem.  

"I think you are looking for that right one and if they don't fit, then you punish them to fit what you want!"
"Change comes when the pain to stand still becomes greater than the pain to move."

[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 01-06-2001).]
dragonpoe
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Palm Bay, Florida


5 posted 01-07-2001 12:35 AM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

This can be read in many ways, rape as you mentioned, a warning about moving too fast, too young, or just about the reality of it all. Well done.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
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