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In Your Arms (song)
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In Your Arms (song) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hi again. well this is alittle differant. this is a song that i wrote for my ex girlfriend. i always felt safe in her arms. now the only way i can be in them is to dream. tell me what you think. just a quick note the letters above the words are the chords you would play on the guitar. IN YOUR ARMS by: Jesse Charles Jaymz G C G I've been on these roads for so very long, G C D Traveling these lonely highways untill the break of dawn, G C G All I wanna do is come back home to you, G D C G Cuz then I'll finaly be back where I belong, CHORUS C And thats in your arms, G where you can hold me, and shelter me all night, D In your arms, C where you can you comfort me and tell me everything will, D alright, C D G Em I've been traveling with this band for to damn long, C D G I just can't wait to get back into your arms. G C Every song we play, G Reminds me of you, G C I remember all the things we love, D and what we used to do, G C all these little honkytonks, G just seem to look the same, G D C but this guitars haunting melodee just seems to scream G your name. C I wish i was in your arms, G where you can hold me, and shelter me all night, D In your arms, C where you can you comfort me and tell me everything will, D alright, C D G Em I've been traveling with this band for to damn long, C D G I just can't to get back into your arms. G C G As I lay myself down to dream, G C D I think about how wonderful that it would seem, G C G To hold you close and keep you near, G D C G So I sleep to be with you my dear, C Cuz then I'll be in your arms, G where you can hold me, and shelter me all night, D In your arms, C where you can you comfort me and tell me everything will, D alright, C D G Em I've been traveling with this band for to damn long, C D G I just can't to get back into your arms. Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"I've been traveling with this band for too damn long"....So, big guy, decision time. Do you stop traveling, settle down, find a stable relationship? Or, do you find a woman who can travel and sing with you? Or, do you find a woman who is content to sit at home while you travel? Hmmmm...things to ponder. Like the song...sad, but I like it. Hardrock |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thanks hardrock well looks like i will continue with the band. my girl broke up with me. =( so it looks like i am just another blues man alone on the road. thanks for likeing it though. i love feedback Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, I liked it too, jesse...and where there was one love, there'll be another. And the memories you built are wonderful in the future. Hang in there and keep on strumming! jwesley |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
there might be another person in my life. but there will never be another love. for i have forever closed off my heart. wanda was the only that ever opened it. and now she has hurt me so badly. the walls are back up. the once open fun loving guitar player is now a lonly wandering blues man again. just me and my guitar forever. thanks for liking the song. it means alot Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
WRONG JESSE!! you can't have closed off your heart if you write lines like this .. .. you might not think it right now but you'll love again one day .. beautiful song  philip |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
i hope you are right my friend, i really do. Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I printed this off for one of my friends to play....I'm sure they didn't play it the way you do, but it's sweet. BWA. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Just offering you a smile for this one. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow Jesse this is great!! In every one of your poems Elmo finds a tear  ~HUGS~ (SMILE) LOVE ELMO <3 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"So I sleep to be with you my dear cuz then I'm in your arms." Nice song Jesse, lots of good lines..true to life...lots of us are missing someone special and only have our dreams and thoughts to solice us.. I think the best way to get over someone lost is to find a new one...cause thinking about the old one is living in the past and finding a new one is living in the present and shaping a new and exciting future for our happiness...just because we failed in a past relationship doesn't mean the next one won't work.. My son that is in the army in Texas has joined a band...he is the drummer...he just bought a mic for himself and said he is going to start singing also...I was hoping he could write some of his own songs as you do...you have a talent..he told me they are recording professionally in March. One of the great songwriters Harry Chapin put stories into songs..for example "Cat's in the Cradle" by Harry and Sandra Chapin and "Halfway to Heaven" is a good song about the temptations of life... Check out this poem he wrote... One Simple Question by Harry Chapin Why, I said to myself, with one and a half billion women in the world, more or less, must I lie here and play night's silly fluted tune unaccompanied? Especiallly as I am sure that a goodly portion of that one and a half billion are unaccompanied and humming the same quick fingered melody. taker careful...James |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
angel: *hugs* thank you. that was sweet. next time i see you on msn i will play it for you. i cant wait Dragonpoe: *hugs* my strenth comes from you. thank you so much for being here today. aint it odd that the day i decide to sing this song it gets brought back??  thank you so much for all your help. elmo: please dont cry *hugs* where have you been?? i missed talkin to you. i hope all is well and e-mail me thank you for the sweet replyJames: thank you my friend for the words. you have always liked my stuff and i thank you for that. but this song was written back in july. and thats when i posted it. i thought it was cool that someone went back and read it. *thanks angel* and i really liked that poem at the end of your reply. i will have to remember that. and good luck to your son. i hope he makes it. thank you againpeace love and rock and roll to all jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Lovely song If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
keep writing james...loved it hon..HUGS ~v~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
AVANTI: thank you so much victoria: always love when you stop by to read. thank you *hugs* love jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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