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Swamp了aeryie
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since 12-04-2000
Posts 395
fairyland....of course;)


0 posted 01-02-2001 09:04 PM       View Profile for Swamp了aeryie   Email Swamp了aeryie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Swamp了aeryie

There's a clock
tick tock
inside my head.
And he's a little
in the middle
canadian fast fast.

There's a fast
future past
inside my mind.
And she's bitter
hard hitter
chinese pow pow.

There's a pow-wow
no how
inside my brain.
And he's a little insane
not to blame
red man scream.

There's a scream
in my dreams
inside my skull.
And she's a little loud
burial shroud
german suicide.

There's a suicide
princess bride (stuck)
inside my everything.
And i'm a little gloomy
so sue me.
white american female found dead.




"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon
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SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
Posts 2428


1 posted 01-02-2001 09:15 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Bam! Stirring words! Powerful! Brave. So well written. Thank you for sharing this. *Peace.
Jannel
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 498
Muncie, IN, USA


2 posted 01-02-2001 10:24 PM       View Profile for Jannel   Email Jannel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jannel

wow. that was a really great progression of pieces. and a lot was said within that progression. great work.

jannel
Swamp了aeryie
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fairyland....of course;)


3 posted 01-04-2001 12:48 AM       View Profile for Swamp了aeryie   Email Swamp了aeryie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Swamp了aeryie

thank you spitfire and jannel ,why you guys always so nice to me?  i appreciate your comments!! =]

sammi


"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon
brian madden
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since 05-06-2000
Posts 4532
ireland


4 posted 01-05-2001 03:23 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Sammi, wow, some great images, this one packs a punch.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy
dragonpoe
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since 11-12-2000
Posts 617
Palm Bay, Florida


5 posted 01-05-2001 04:10 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

wonderful! fast and hard and powerful. Sounds much like a sound my favorite artist would do a great job singing. I enjoyed this very much.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
dragonpoe
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6 posted 01-05-2001 04:14 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

Just had to read this again, I really like it. The more I read it, the more I like it. Just thought you should know.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
DreamSeeker
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since 11-17-2000
Posts 74


7 posted 01-05-2001 06:41 PM       View Profile for DreamSeeker   Email DreamSeeker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreamSeeker

the file keeper
gray matter custodian
marvels at the signs of sounds
corners illuminted within

oh lord not That Self
again
the lords of file 13
laugh hysterically
at me

hidden features
eye camoflauge
saves a face defines
the mirrors scream



The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise

Swamp了aeryie
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since 12-04-2000
Posts 395
fairyland....of course;)


8 posted 01-07-2001 12:13 AM       View Profile for Swamp了aeryie   Email Swamp了aeryie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Swamp了aeryie

Well thank you everyone!! i'm overwhelmed and delighted!! And btw dragonpoe....i was thinking of it for a song too. Janis Joplin meets punk style whaddaya think? :P
And Dream Seeker,your verses remind me of the spanish inquisition for some reason....or the pit and the pedulum =]

thanks!!
samatha


"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon
 
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