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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
There's a clock tick tock inside my head. And he's a little in the middle canadian fast fast. There's a fast future past inside my mind. And she's bitter hard hitter chinese pow pow. There's a pow-wow no how inside my brain. And he's a little insane not to blame red man scream. There's a scream in my dreams inside my skull. And she's a little loud burial shroud german suicide. There's a suicide princess bride (stuck) inside my everything. And i'm a little gloomy so sue me. white american female found dead. "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Bam! Stirring words! Powerful! Brave. So well written. Thank you for sharing this. *Peace. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
wow. that was a really great progression of pieces. and a lot was said within that progression. great work. jannel |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
thank you spitfire and jannel ,why you guys always so nice to me?  i appreciate your comments!! =]sammi "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sammi, wow, some great images, this one packs a punch. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
wonderful! fast and hard and powerful. Sounds much like a sound my favorite artist would do a great job singing. I enjoyed this very much. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Just had to read this again, I really like it. The more I read it, the more I like it. Just thought you should know. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
the file keeper gray matter custodian marvels at the signs of sounds corners illuminted within oh lord not That Self again the lords of file 13 laugh hysterically at me hidden features eye camoflauge saves a face defines the mirrors scream The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
Well thank you everyone!! i'm overwhelmed and delighted!! And btw dragonpoe....i was thinking of it for a song too. Janis Joplin meets punk style whaddaya think? :P And Dream Seeker,your verses remind me of the spanish inquisition for some reason....or the pit and the pedulum =] thanks!! samatha "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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