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Desolate Despair |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
What a terribly lonely solitude and a desolate despair, When the love you desperately seek... simply isn’t there. You never see the sunrise or sunset's golden glow, Because you never feel the touch that only she’ll bestow. And life seems deathly grim in the absence of a caress, When you lose the will to live; and your love you must repress. The anguish and the pain, when she walks on someone’s arm, And the jealousy you feel when she displays her magic charm. And as I meet my God... I’ll think of her 'til the last. How life could have been... if she’d loved me in the past. But no sorrow will I show and my sadness is a cure. If you think she was ne’er a part of me... You’re wrong... you always were. |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Awwww....that's sucha sad sweet poem. I really liked it. I feel kinda like that sometimes (only not about a chick...about a guy...) Very good... Dark Star |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah! What an ending!! Quite a twist!  Fantastic piece of writing. Thanks for sharing. Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a very fine piece eegood, the pain will diminish to a dull glow. hang in there. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is so bittersweet....i enjoyed it very much. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
I'm saving this one!! Beautiful... What a great ending... so true... I think I'm speachless coz it just touched me so deep inside. Thank you for writing this, it's so... soooo great! Take Care! "Did I ask too much? More than a lot You gave me nothing Now it's all I got..." U2/One |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I really enjoyed this poem it was beautiful and it is a feeling that i know very well. "There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin |
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