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demoninlove
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since 2000-02-11
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Dehradun

0 posted 2000-07-28 01:45 PM


The Rose of Autumn is but a vanishing dream
Blurred by the falling leaves, once so green.
But unlike the leaves which, dying, turn to gold
The destiny of the Autumn Rose is to fade away - unseen.

From "Tamam Shudh"
Deepak



© Copyright 2000 Deepak Menon - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-07-28 02:56 PM


Beautiful Image Deepak, very nice and thanks for sharing!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-28 05:45 PM


I agree Deepak..very beautiful imagery.  I have felt at times like the Autumn Rose..Hardrock
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-07-28 09:57 PM


mmmm. I like this!

Joy

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
4 posted 2000-07-28 10:58 PM


very  beautiful
~~soft smiles
M

demoninlove
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since 2000-02-11
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Dehradun
5 posted 2000-07-29 09:16 AM


Thanks all - and I hope that all your lives are like the Golden Leaves of Autumn and the roses in your lives never fade!


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