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Dark Poetry #2

The World's Embrace

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

0 posted 2000-07-25 10:11 PM

In the stillness
Of the night
When the stream
Makes music..

I have a pair of
Dauntless wings
Im hypnotized into
The isolating air

The clouds..
A feathery bed
The stars..
White, shimmering..
Uncut jewels

I an subdued
By the world's embrace

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-07-26 01:23 AM

Awesome, just an awesome poem. Great use of words. Keep it up.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-07-26 05:18 AM

This is so beautiful ...
What else can I say?

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

L Tiuch
Member

since 2000-02-04

Posts 151
NY

3 posted 2000-07-26 10:19 AM

What a peaceful image you created. I love this. Linda

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 2000-07-26 10:38 AM

Deb..such beautiful thoughts. You CAN fly on those dauntless wings. Hardrock

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-07-26 11:22 AM

Very beautiful picture Deb. I can see you flying, happy, peaceful. Love it."Subdued by the worlds embrace" is a great line!
Sandra

Chere
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 18

6 posted 2000-07-26 01:58 PM

Oh, what a special place to go. Unbidden by the concrete . . . I love the imagery you gathered in your flight*

Chere

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