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Wall of Stone
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Wall of Stone |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Wall of Stone  that wall of stone is full of cracks she chisels at it everyday when breaking through her smile comes back allowing her a little stay. a word or two that's given her brings to her face, a smile again but truthfully, it never lasts as behind her wall, thoughts rise within. thoughts of how can life go on with feeling lost and oh so cold like that of stone, the chill is there as time goes on, as she grows old. a wedding band, she takes it off and leaves it often by itself. reminds her then, when viewing it she feels the same set back on shelf. a year has passed since feeling's lost a newness edged her wall, thus patched. behind her now, she leans for strength as hands surround with fingers latched. his body tight, no space between just beating hearts, their flutter felt caressing he with whispered breaths as bodies blend, in each they melt. the kisses deep the air is thick a shallowness, they sink into a world of lust, desire craved a heaviness, a drenching due. sliding down releasing sighs stretching out, upon the floor in arms she's caught, her body held, her mind is spent from want of more. come thoughts to each of moments lost and sultry eyes of hazel hue what once had been, was here once more repression gone seduction new. M 7*2k |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
MMoonchild...great imagery here. I missed this on the first go-round. Glad I caught up with it. Hardrock |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
WOW!! Painful & hot at the same time..well done. Got my mind going on matters of life. Some of it is good, some of it is not. Thank you!! Click |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hardrock thank you for not bypassing me..I was beginning to wonder if I should have just deleted this one and the other.. ~~soft smiles M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Glad you enjoyed, Click and thank you for responding ~~softsmiles Maureen |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Now, on one hand, I might say I really enjoyed this, but I don't think that's the exact feel I got from this. See, I've been the man on the other side, weeping from "those" eyes wandering... and leaving. This really reminded me of that... and made me think... I love when something makes me think. Thank you for that. Christopher Now with the wisdom of years I try to reason things out And the only people I fear Are those who never have doubt. -Billy Joel |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I am glad you thought, Chris, but I wonder sometimes, how long does one wait...in silence...how long does one have to be alone, while not alone...how long does one have to wait before they are no longer themselves but a spirit searching to "feel" again. thank you Maureen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Maureen, this is beautiful. Imagery, words, thoughts. And I too ask, as you just said to Christopher, "how long does one have to be alone yet not alone" From this poem, It looks like you found your answer, and it has been good. I missed this poem before also, and I am so glad I saw it. It speaks volumes to me. Thanks. Be happy. Catalinamoon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Catalina..I can't really be happy..can only have momentary happiness now as I have an inner struggle going on and I am not sure who the winner will be...the old me wanting what once was or the new me wanting it and more...thanks for always reading and replying ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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