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L Tiuch
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 151
NY

0 posted 2000-07-24 01:42 PM



I try so hard to be brave and strong
Yet whatever I do seems to be wrong
The love that I need, just isn't there
I've no one to cherish, no one to care
I want so much to be loved, to be needed
Yet warnings, so clear, I let go unheeded
My future looks empty...I'm filled with fear
To be all alone year after year
The love that I feel just will not die
So alone I will be and alone I will cry
I'll keep the memories of times that we had
All of the good, yes, even the bad
The children are mine, at least for awhile
They're good for me now sometimes I can smile
Maybe with time, the pain will be less
The hurt will subside, I only can guess
But the sadness I feel will always be there
As I go on alone with no one to share
My ups and my downs, the good and the bad
Never knowing the love I wished that I'd had

Linda Tiuch

I wish I had this place years ago...I felt so totally alone...and thought, of course, that I was the only one who ever felt this way.  I have come to learn that we are never alone; that love comes in many guises.

© Copyright 2000 Linda Tiuch - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-24 01:58 PM


~Linda,...what a heart heavy poem you have written....and so well I might add.  Again,...your words make the reader 'feel'. Oh and thank you for the little note at the end....otherwise I would have given you a great big lecture on the love that surrounds us all. Take care and I'm personally glad that you have joined our little 'family'. Be well LT. *Peace.
LarBear
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York
2 posted 2000-07-24 02:53 PM


L Tiuch,

Wow, heart felt emotions beyond imagination. Dark Passions is here to share your feelings just like this. I cant think of a single better way to release emotions than poems with such great feelings put into them. Welcome to our family.

LarBear

Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
3 posted 2000-07-24 02:57 PM


Very lovely Linda...welcome to Passions! Just by visiting you can be assured that you are not alone!

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
4 posted 2000-07-24 03:03 PM


Linda, I felt the same way when I found Dark Passions, such caring people here, welcome!!! Your poem was excellent, reminded me of many things I have felt myself at different times in my life. Thank you for sharing, hope to see more as always!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
5 posted 2000-07-25 08:03 AM


Linda - If this were a book submission   it would certainly have my vote!!!  There are many out there who could benefit from reading this little gem. Beautifully written emotion.  Bonnie

[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-25-2000).]

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