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Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-07-23 08:13 PM




Looking at the pain,
this too will pass,
it is fading fast.

Lost are times,
both good and bad,
losing it makes me sad.

If I could keep,
the ones most dear,
remember times with you near.

Ruined good,
with out regret,
I will lose even yet.

Keep the faith,
that I feel,
taking the time to heal.

Never quit,
I can't go on,
knowing that you are gone.

Take the chance,
one more try,
loving you until I die!

© Copyright 2000 Click - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-23 09:11 PM


~Very creative in your writing here. WoW, twisty and touching all in the same. Sad. Be well C. *Peace.
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-07-24 01:15 AM


the torture of going on in spite of it all... you express it exquisitely.  thank you.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-07-24 08:14 AM


Pushing past the pain, to continue on with our lives...you expressed this very nicely. Sometimes its like taking those baby steps, but we keep going!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-07-25 05:04 AM


Another excellent piece, Click.
Really well expressed! Keep them coming!  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



moshpit
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-07-25 06:29 AM


so sad, yet so beautiful.. well done, Click.
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