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Professor Gloom
Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-07-23 05:00 PM


The ladies in pure bright white,
The caring,
Would turn off the glaring light,
And the screaming would begin.
The caring,
Would attempt to calm again,
But nothing was soothing him
The dreaming
Of death to youth frightening
Till needles would make him drift,
The dreaming
Cast him down and didn’t lift
And morning would find waking,
The caring
Were the giving and taking
Giving life not understood
And taking
Away the pain if they could.

Gloom


© Copyright 2000 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-23 05:08 PM


"the dreaming of death to youth frightening"...I know this feeling.  But mine just slipped away one day when I wasn't looking.  I'm still searching.  Welcome to DP, Professor.  Excellent First Post.  Hardrock
Professor Gloom
Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2000-07-23 05:13 PM


Thank you for the kind welcome,
I look forward to learning more about this place and the people here by reading the words they have place for me to see.

Gloom

MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
3 posted 2000-07-23 07:14 PM


Welcome, Gloomy One...this was a perfect first post...you will find it very shadowed here at times and at others light trying to peek through...

well, maybe me trying to take a peek at your words, anyway
~~softly
Maureen

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2000-07-24 12:28 PM


Welcome to Dark Passions!    Very good first post here, loved it.  And yes I do agree with above, this place does get very gloomy at times.  But HEY.... we are still  luvable!  

Welcome again
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Professor Gloom
Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
5 posted 2000-07-24 09:46 PM


Thank you for the welcome
MMoonchild & Dark_kisses_Within

I might find a home here then
but Gloom is I
and I am Gloom

Your words encourage

Gloom

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