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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392


0 posted 2000-07-22 03:46 PM


(these were also written in "99)

THE GUEST

"I welcome you to my world of sin.
Please, come in.
Would you care for a seat,
Or maybe a rare piece of meat?
I can offer you some wine
while we dine.
Tell me, would you care to have a treat...
my succubus you are free to meet?!
My, I must say,
your blood...ehem, I do mean pachouly you are wearing smells good this day.
Would you care for a knife to slice your wrists...ehem,meat?
I think it grand we have had just a chance to conversate.
I do so enjoy being able to,upon your lips...ehem, mind concentrate.
I must say, I find your neck...ehem, necklace beautiful.
Excuse me, would you care for another goblet full?
So,do tell, how long would you care to stay?
Do not worry, I won't let you get away...
ehem, i do mean, as long as you like you are welcome.
Please, follow me,
to your room, you see.
I'll try not to bite......
ehem, i do mean, I'll show you the light,which is on your right.
Come, do sit
for a bit.
Would you care if upon you I feed...
ehem, I do mean, would you care for a book to read?
You are such an entertaining guest...
I do think you are the best.
Would you care to entertain my every erotic bliss....
ehem, i do mean, do you care if I give you a good eve kiss?
I do hope you enjoy your night.
I do so like one to put up a good fight....
ehem, i do mean, may I turn out your light?
Shall I get the whips and chains...
ehem, i do mean,I hope my curtisy eases some of your pains.
Now rest and do not fear...
for my tasting of your salty sweet treat you will never hear...
ehem, I do mean, do not shed a tear.
SSsshh, go back to sleep
and do not weep...
I was just checking to make certain I had not cut too deep....
ehem, i do mean....."


THE GUESTS' REPLY

"I thank you for your curtisy.
I must say what a lovely home you have, I see.
Excuse me if you think me rude,
but may I ask why such a strange mood?
You seem such a kindly host,
but a bit taken by your strange words, I must boast.
I would so enjoy a goblet of wine
and with you to dine.
Succubus...would I care to meet?
Do tell, you consider this a treat?
I thank you for your flattery on my patchouly,
but I must say that your words of my blood make me a bit chilly.
I would like a knife to cut my meat...
but my wrists?
You are not good at hidding what is on your mind...far from discreate.
I also am glad that you enjoy upon my mind to concentrate...
but my lips? Is that fate?
UUUMMM...I am not possotive of how long I will be able to stay...
hhhmmmm, I think this situation is odd, this eve I will attempt to get away.
Well thank you much, this room is lovely...
Excuse me, but did you just try to bite me?
UUUMMM....it does seem to be a bit late...
just a minute, what do you think me to be,a dinner plate?
Could you kindly, yes, turn out my light?
I would so enjoy a good eve kiss.....
UUUMMM.....what is this of erotic bliss?
Thank you for your kind words, but I do have no pains....
UUUMMM, I could have sworn I heard the clinking of chains?
Thank you once again for allowing me to stay hear...
but why do you think I would shed a tear?
UUUMMM......what is this...you have awakened me?
UUUMMM....My wrists do sting...
What the Hell are you doing to me??
UUUMMM....




"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

© Copyright 2000 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-22 04:12 PM


Oh Affy...what a mind you have!!  This was so good...I love how you constructed it.  I had such vision while reading it...my mind tossed like a ping-pong ball in a gale.  I don't think I'll be staying over however.  Hardrock
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
2 posted 2000-07-22 06:21 PM


Just to be able to create this!!! Wow the mind was full speed ahead...I agree though no overnight visits!! Great read, thanks for sharing.

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

3 posted 2000-07-22 09:49 PM


Cool! This is really awsome! Wow! Neat!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

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