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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
If I could I'd spend the day Lying in the sun I'd hike the highest mountain I'd do that five mile run I'd book a class At the work-out Spa I'd love to "feel the burn" I'd put on my cap.. Swim some laps Oh how I do yearn The "Natural High" I remember well.. Inspired me to sweat It cleansed my soul Helped me feel whole It can't be over yet.. I wrestle with the memories I think "Remission" every day.. Hope motivates my thought-out plan.. To live another way The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Deb, I'll do that run for you, And you can dry my sweat. It's hope that motivates both of us, We aren't done living yet. We'll lay under full-moon's glow, And pretend that it's the sun. I'll hold you close beside me, And like Isis, call you "Hon". We'll laugh a lover's laugh or two, When caught in summer's rain. And if I could, you know I would, Take away your pain. Love ya, Kid. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Deb, what a lowely poem, so wistful, and so unfair that those things are taken from you. But you have so much more in your heart, and that is working perfectly. Love you |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
That was so beautiful Deb  I too remember the memories. Hmmmmmm life!!Peace DkW |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Hey kid, don't give up hope! Keep smiling- exersize for the face! Lots of hugs -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Oh, what a wonderful poem! Yeah, know what you mean. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Deborah,...I keep coming back to this one. Have read it a few times now. Shoot. To say, "If I could",... just gets into me. This is so full of feeling...makes me feel. Great writing. Take care D. *Peace. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oops. Sorry. (Clicked that twice I guess). [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Deborah1, Im not sure of the exact motivation in this peice, but we all have those things we would like to do. Actually this one made me laughat the fact that I would like do do some things that time and pressures of life have eliminated from my life. And then Spit Fire Clicking twice. God I needed that laugh... Good one Spit Fire LarBear |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
The feeling of regret is almost tangible...amazing... |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hi! This is my second attempt to reply to this (computer crashed). Although I don't do the things you mention here  you really demonstrate how we take the simple things for granted!Thanks for that. And I hope you're OK! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Thanks everyone for the kind comments! This was created due to living with a chronic illness, just expressions of the losses. Thanks again! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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