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The Journey |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I walked a way of glass I swim a sea of shards I'll climb a cliff Of sliding stones That will crash below To a valley of bones Above the sky Of silver green Devours the sun With banshee scream And yet I follow This infinite road Hoping to find A grain of gold Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
OOOH, I really, REALLY liked this! Treading through all that just to find a tiny bit of gold......great work! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta..this poem reminded me of wading through Dark Passions, reading all the posts, til I find that "grain of gold" like this poem. Lovely....Hardrock PS...did I tell you that you are beautiful? |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Life's one ardous journey indeed... Short, simple and precise ... I really like this one! verve~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, beautiful. Just the way it is, so many obstacles block the way to the good stuff. Love it. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I liked this one very much Uta. Very atmospheric! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Uta,...EXACTLY!!! Love the images painted by your truly poetic words. Damn good piece here. No book submission??? Be well gurly. *Peace. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I really liked this one. Great job, as always!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Great poem. I like the way you desribe the unreachable. LarBear |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Thanks all! Marvin, have I told you that you are rather handsome yourself?  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I wanted to vote?? This was very good, I like the concept, how we make our way through all the debris to get to that pot of gold, nice poem!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Awesome. It had some powerful imagery for me. Keep it up. |
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