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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738


0 posted 2000-07-19 07:11 AM


Oh no!
You have made me
Question the blandness
Of my existence...

Oh yes!
Now I want
To gobble
You up.


~ Tara ~
14.7.00

© Copyright 2000 Tara - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-19 08:20 AM


What a difference meeting someone special can make in our lives. Very aptly describd.



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-19 08:28 AM


Hear, hear, Tara.  I agree with Cat.  Meeting that special someone can make a difference, even if it hurts, at least it's not bland.  Hardrock
sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

3 posted 2000-07-19 09:17 AM


Ditto! Hope this is a relationship filled with much happiness!


         ~Sash~

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-07-19 12:10 PM


What a great little piece, Tara!
I really love the lines "now I want to gobble you up"!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
5 posted 2000-07-19 12:39 PM


Very interesting, especially when we end up mirroring ourselves!! I agree a great piece..loved it, the gobble up..very good!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

6 posted 2000-07-19 07:40 PM


I want to gobble this poem up! Wow! This was good!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

7 posted 2000-07-19 08:45 PM


~Heh. Yes!!! Tara,...right on. Great writing. Take care T. *Peace.
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