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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-07-16 04:06 PM


EYES SEALED SHUT!

Why are our eyes,
so tight when we kiss?
Aren't we afraid,
there's sumpthin we'll miss?

No of course not,
what's greater than this?
There's nothing so powerful,
as one simple kiss.

Closed eyes make,
it just right!
Every tingly feeling,
our imagination takes flight.

Fireworks in our heads,
better than anything around.
Have I just grown wings?
Are my feet still on the ground?

My imagination runs wild.
My heart gives a giggle.
My whole body tingles,
when we let our lips wiggle.

So close your eyes now,
& slowly move in.
Let's caress our lips together,
& give them a spin!

~All the fun starts with a simple kiss, so of course it's too great to ever miss!~

LOVE ELMO



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Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-17 09:08 AM


Ahhh yes, the magic in a kiss.  Even when it's not from one we are particularly in love with, the magic is still there.  What IS it about this simple little act of flesh pressing that stirs us so...and who was the first to discover it?  Nice, Elmo..very nice.  Hardrock
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-07-17 12:27 PM


This is really sweet. A kiss. So simple and yet so great. Love it. I want to kiss my husband now, but he isn't here  

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2000-07-17 05:24 PM


Thanx & LOL  sowwie lotharingia didnt mean to make ya crave a kiss   yea i always want a kiss but my boyfriend lives 5 hours away  
LOVE ELMO

Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
4 posted 2000-07-17 06:31 PM


This brings those happy thoughts remembering the "before" feeling and then the kiss!! Nicely done!!!
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
5 posted 2000-07-18 11:42 AM


thanx Deb this poem came to me after a dream of my boyfriend  I haven't seen him in 2 months   LOVE ELMO!!
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