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BrittH26
New Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 9
florida

0 posted 2000-07-16 03:39 AM

               Such lovely eyes you have

              my child as blue as the sea,but I

              sence a bit of sadness that noone

               else can see. The many storms you've

               faught against this raging world has

              left you with scars hidden deep within

               your pores. Inside you fight the

               constant battle raging in your soul

                as angry waves crash all around

                pulling you deep within it's fold.

                 Oh but how calm you look on the

                 outside as carefree as the wind

                 only your seablue eyes of

                  tranquility show the danger

                 brewing within.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-07-16 06:21 AM

This is a beautiful poem, so deep. It reminds me of my young nephew, though his eyes are brown I see the same in them.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-07-16 09:37 AM

Very descriptive, you can feel the stories behind the eyes. Great poem. Welcome to DP.

"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

3 posted 2000-07-16 12:18 PM

So grand your words are...
My grandmother taught me, when I was little, that the eyes are the window to ones soul and those words I have never forgotten and have lived by sence then.......
Allo the "GODS" rest her loving soul.......

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

4 posted 2000-07-16 01:03 PM

Welcome to Dark Passions!

This was a very lovely poem, I enjoyed it very much. I too believe that the eyes tell the story. Your eyes tell the sadness you have encountered, or the happiness you have within you. Great poem and welcome again!

Peace
DkW

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-07-16 04:58 PM

Welcome to the family. A nice entry! Check your email for a special message.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-07-16 11:20 PM

~So true,...they are. I truly enjoyed the way that this read. It just went smoothly and sort of softly and touched me. Thank you for sharing. Be well. *Peace.

~*Welcome,welcome,welcome here!!!

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[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-16-2000).]

BrittH26
New Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 9
florida

7 posted 2000-07-18 02:36 AM

i just wanted to thankyou all for the responce to my pome. it was my first time posting one and i was scared to death. Thanks again

Britt

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

8 posted 2000-07-18 11:52 AM

Britt..what a nice poem!! Good imagery here. Enjoyed it. Hardrock PS, never be afraid of us here in DP...we are all friends here.

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