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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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Total Sensory Deprivation No light No sound No touch No smell No taste It matters not….when there’s no love. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Once again, so much said in so few words.... You capture imagery, minds and ones imagination so very well! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Marvin? This is very sparse. It sounds like the void. Like death ... A life without love is no life at all? I love you  And your poems  Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very nice poem! Kinda sad though  Love is such a gift..... something some people take for granted. |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Amen brother! Simply stated, simply true. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Hardrock, a concise and powerful truth my friend. well said "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
no it matters not. but it helps replace what is missing sometimes. far from a wordsmith poem my friend. excellent work. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Once again, such a true and powerful statement. I have started a file of Hardrock poems. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I agree.  |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh how love does bring to life our senses!!! One of a kind...by one of a kind!! Love, Love, Love it!!! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hardrock,...hhm, sounds like hell alright! I think I've visited this place before....lots of strenuous work crawling out. Brief but full of powerful thoughts. Be well buddy. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i hope all is ok with you and this is great hell indeed and i live there with my nagging girl friend as the devil. damn i can't wait to move. enjoyed this poem as i do all your work keep it up my friend. p.s be waiting for that email cause i'll be moving real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
But it is self induced????? We have to always remember to make the myths, make the legends, hope and search for what is illusive in our lives. The dismal bottomless pit is a horrid place to live, yet one we must ever battle to be free of. Wonderful perceptions here, great work!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
And i agree with of their replies above! verve~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh this is sooo very true!!! Nice Hardrock!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
I've felt the same a couple times. Well done! |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
Much calmer than Toxic... Well done. |
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