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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Agrivation Frustration I think I'll l.ose my mind I don't want to Love no one Leave me alone cause I'm just fine Depression Agression I don't want to stand in line Don't want you Can't save you Why can't you leave me be Bad voices Bad friends I will not be your victim Don't love me Don't hate me Just don't know me at all Not helping Just complaining I will not take this from you Get back Get out I don't want to know you |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Welcome here.~ *Oh my!!! What an expression here. Goodness me,...lots of doors being shut, closing off unwanted things. Looking forward to your future posts. Thank you for sharing your work. Be well. *Peace. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
yes, welcome from me too. Strong feelings coming out in this poem. Take care Catalinamoon |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
ECK!!!!  Welcome to Dark Passions. Now this poem was like a total wake up call! HELLO? Dont slam all your doors my friend. It may not seem like it, but some of them doors might be the ones you actually want to keep open. Be careful who you "shew" away in your life.Nice flow tho, keep it coming.  Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Intense here...liked it a lot!!! Welcome to Passions!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
INTENSE!!! Great work. I enjoyed this read. Welcome to Passions, am awaiting reading more... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Hi and Welcome to Passions!! Alot of feelings here, well written, look forward to more!!! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Yeppers, DT....sometimes you just want to be alone. But don't make a habit of it. Good poem. Hardrock |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Welcome to Passions, and welcome to Dark! And thank you for this sprinkle of darkness into our day! It effectively emanates the feeling of coldness I'm guessing you were looking for. (Heck, I almost stayed away just reading the title!) Christopher |
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