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Dark Poetry #2

Bid the day adiu

essenceofangels
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 36

0 posted 2000-07-14 07:30 PM

motionless I sit
dwelled in your warmth

your sweet kiss
leaves me breathless
and without a taste

essences captivate
my imagination deeper
every time

the precision of your heart
growes deeper everyday

as we bid the day adiu
and wish the night welcome
You say "I love you"
and I say me to
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"Look back on life with kindly eyes"

"A word is dead When it is said,
Some say.I say it just Begins to live That day."

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essenceofangels

[This message has been edited by essenceofangels (edited 07-14-2000).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-07-14 10:53 PM

Am I wrong or is this actually a happy moment in time? I hope so. Love can be so great..
Awesome poem also,
Catalinamoon

"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

2 posted 2000-07-18 09:00 AM

I sense the carefree "happy" heart, and I loved it!!! Nice sentiments!!

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 2000-07-18 11:55 AM

EOA...nice read..reminded me of one I wrote called, "Hurry Sundown"...hope to see more from you. Hardrock

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