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ChibiDeathscythe
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0 posted 2000-07-06 05:21 PM


Some other daddies go away
but you were always there to stay
helping me along my way
I love you more than words can say
My father, I love you, I really do.

And though sometimes its hard to show
both you and I have always known
we will always, always love each other
and you will always love my mother

We have been lucky to be this way
and I thank God every day
that you were always here to say
"I love you."

And when no boy would ever think
to be my valentine
you would always be there
you will always be mine

And I won't ever leave you
though I may move away
I'll be with you in your heart
every single day

I am lucky to have a father like you
I look around and see other fathers
who just don't care the way you do


I guess I just wanted to say,
I love you daddy, I really do.



© Copyright 2000 Mary K. - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-06 06:01 PM


How blessed you are to have a wonderful Dad. I hope he reads this too. Very nice poem.
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-07-06 07:00 PM


~This is the sweetest thing. Definately let him read it.  You've written well of the love and admiration for him.  Aaww. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace.
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-07-06 10:54 PM


well wonderful work as always. i hope you showed this to your dad and i bet he cried. i love all your work there filled with so much meaning. i just wish my life was the same way but thats the way life works.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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4 posted 2000-07-06 10:56 PM


awww that just touched my heart its just the way i feel about my dad my parents are divorced & i miss spending time with him he's the only person who's ever understood me   & now he is very sick & stuck in bed he has a very rare disease that only one other person has had (& died because they couldnt identify it in time) i loved your poem & i would like to share it with my father    
ChibiDeathscythe
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since 2000-06-09
Posts 128

5 posted 2000-07-06 11:57 PM


I am glad you all liked it   I haven't shown it to him yet.....but I plan on it soon  
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
6 posted 2000-07-07 04:29 AM


This brought tears to my eyes! How lucky you are to have a dad who loves you and how lucky he is to have a daughter who writes him such a poem! I hope all good daddys get praised like this!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
7 posted 2000-07-07 04:06 PM


The sweetest words a dad could ever hear.
No matter what, our daughters will always be our little girls.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2000-07-07 04:49 PM



What a beautiful tribute to your daddy.  
This has my vote!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

kaile
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singapore
9 posted 2000-07-08 02:53 AM


wonderful poem and a timely reminder to us al to express our love for our loved ones while they are still around
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
10 posted 2000-07-08 11:31 PM


A wonderful tribute. I'm glad you are going to share it with him.

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Jenn Cirrincione
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11 posted 2000-07-09 12:20 PM


Sweetie, wow. Tell your father you love him everyday... I love mine, He just never lets me tell or show him... Your father is lucky. You have my vote.
Jenn

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