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SlyOne
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since 2000-06-24
Posts 16


0 posted 2000-07-09 02:03 PM


LIFE                

My days are filled with anguish and pain.
My nights are engulfed with an endless strain.
Through the day I search for a way to end this
feeling of emptiness in my life.
But then night comes and reality cuts me sharp
like a knife.
For it is at night that I realize I have accomplished little in my years.
This is when my eyes began to fill with tears.
Although I know tomorrow will bring rays of
sunshine to a few.
For me it will bring another day filled with
raindrops and dew.
I do have hope for my future to have many
joyous days.
But this will take time , patience , and
walking through a somewhat endless maze.

SLY


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Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-09 02:09 PM


your anguish does not smother the hope inside.
very well penned

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Kitty_Fett
Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 35

2 posted 2000-07-09 02:09 PM


Makes me wanna cry. That is if I had tears. *wistful sigh*. Oh well, that's life!!
--Kitty

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