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Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2000-07-06 02:12 AM


hi yall.  well this is a repost of a poem that my girlfriend wanda did a while back.  well me and her are now broke up.  but i still love her with all my heart.  and i hope someday i can make her mine.  but alas its might be only one of my wild dreams.  but anyways i was chatting with her just alittle while ago and she told me that this poem was for me.  just thought i would share it again.  now i see how much i lost.  
                                                          Dreams

      I lay down tonight  
      To hold you tight
      To dream the dreams
      Of peaceful streams
      The dreams of love

      I lay here now
      Never to awake
      Because when i do
      Everythings so blue
      Its a dream
      Expecially of you

       Wanting more than every before
       A love so true
       That only a few
       Have ever seen

      The stars up above
      Shines so bright
      Like a million candle lights
      Of all the loves gone by

     Wishing our lives together
     Where nothing else matters
     Holding each other through eternal life
     Together like husband and wife.

     To Dream the Dream

      Wanda Breeden




Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear...
MetallicA "I disappear"


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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-06 10:42 AM


~To dream the dream,...aahhh, how lovely a poem. Thank you for sharing. *Peace.
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-06 11:50 AM


Sorry you are missing her Jesse. It sounds like there may be hope for the future, considering the poem. Take care
Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
3 posted 2000-07-06 11:54 AM


hope??  what is hope??  sadly for me and her i think there is none.  for in my absence she has found another and loves him now.  looks like i will just be alone forever.  just a wonderer in the night

Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear...
MetallicA "I disappear"


Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-07-06 02:04 PM


If she found another when you were gone,
She was never yours all along.  (Sorry for the rhyme...my mind works like that.) Sometimes in a relationship you need a little "check" to be sure this is "the one"...your absence was the check...she wasn't the one.  Imagine if you had married her and had to leave for awhile....and then came home and found her with another?  All this does nothing to ease your pain...but it just means there is something even better waiting for you.  Believe, and it will come.  Hardrock

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
5 posted 2000-07-07 12:59 PM


she was mine.  i messed up and left her.  i didnt want to leave.  hell what did i expect her to do.  sit and wait for a loser like me to come back.  little did she know i had coming back all planned.  guess its just another dream that will never come true.  *cries*

Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear...
MetallicA "I disappear"


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