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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-05 05:30 PM


Yet...had I owned a thousand hearts,
They'd all be yours to break!



© Copyright 2000 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-07-05 07:08 PM


short, but meaningful
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-05 07:28 PM


Only 13 words....and yet so much said in this pledge of love.  Superb....Hardrock
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-07-06 03:07 AM


No way Rex!!!  

Yet.... Had I owned a thousand hearts
They's all be yours to keep  

Nice one rex !!!!  
< !signature-->

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light



[This message has been edited by Dark_kisses_Within (edited 07-06-2000).]

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-07-06 08:28 AM


What a wonderful way to express love. Great, as usual

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-07-06 03:01 PM


short yet powerful do keep it up. its kind of like my work well most of it anyway. you do a great job and i hope to see more of it well do keep it up my friend.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

6 posted 2000-07-06 04:12 PM


Short, sweet and meaningful! Wonderful!
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
7 posted 2000-07-06 04:15 PM


As we know the best of things can come in small packages!! Enjoyed this one
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