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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Haunting demons taunt and tease They shame our souls and minds Telling us that we're to blame For being true and kind. "You deserved it," they will claim "You did not call for help. You laid there silent, not a word To say that you want out." "What's wrong with you? Can't you see? You are the one at fault. You must not have minded it It did not come to a halt." They bind us and control us And we don't understand Why it seems that we're to blame For actions of others' hands. We were innocent and pure unwanting of this sin The fear and shame sealed our lips And froze our love within. ____ _ | __\_\_o____/_| <[___\_\_-----<----------<sheriliegh@sprint.ca>< |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i love this piece as all the others. this is another great poem from you and do keep it up and i know were you are from. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
EXCELLENT! You write about the things I try to hide. The memories that have torn my life apart. And yes ur poems are so very true !! Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~It seems that you write with an aching knowledge for this subject....I can relate in ways and feel for you. Wonderfully expressed here,...it's sort of like a message in a way. Well done. Thank you for sharing it. Take care. *Peace. |
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