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To Love and Cherish |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Born with heart and soul, resource of all Human-kind. His words wreak havoc, and searing torture upon My mind Twisted hatred spews from His every ounce of being. I am but a target that He aims at without seeing. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sash....This is excellent. I sincerly hope this is not a relationship you are in. Frightening imagery here. Hardrock |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is scary. I hope if 'he' is a part of your life that you have someone to talk to about this. Please check your email!  |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i hope if this is about you that your life gets better real soon and hey if you ever need a hit man just email me. LOL. well also welcome to the darkside and i hope you say awhile and keep up the writing. enjoyed the read. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions!! Very nice first post. I hope to see many more. Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I never knew you could write!! Damn fine job of it too!!! I like how the words force a pause in mid read, giving time to feel the impact of the meaning. Thanx!! Make some fruit salad I'll get the beer!! Click |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
Welcome my friend. Very well written poem and hope to see more!! I'll be watching!! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Nicely written, I just hope this person is of no threat to you, Keep writing, I enjoyed this, (keep safe) |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Not bad for a first poem here. Is 'He' an ex that refuses to believe that he is dumped?  --Venus Macleod |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Sash....welcome to Dark Passions. Very well done poem. You've come to the right place. Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Thanks to all...Your compassion is worth more than mere words can express! The "He" is a main part of my life at this time. I sincerely hope he wakes up and smells the coffee...but I'm afaid he has a severe sinus problm!!! LOL ~Sash~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Sash!! Some just refuse to BOTHER to smell the coffee, hope he wakes up, but some never will. Great writing, so sorry you are dealing with this at present, I know how it is hon!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Oh My! That one is serious. "His" actions and work often leave one speechless with a sense of injustice. This one was a great first post - I'm sure the best is yet to come...Well written.. most people know that feeling. Deepak Menon< !signature--> [This message has been edited by demoninlove (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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