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So, I Fall.....
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So, I Fall..... |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
You lost dreamer, have your way I have been your kind. I have wanted and taken, never payed and didn't even mind. Inbred, Lusty; selfish too, I have wanted you. Wanted you and that is all, wanted you and so I fall. P.S. Why is my siggy all screwed up? :\ "Suicides have already betrayed the body. Still born, they don't always die, bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet that even children would |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
A really dreamy sad one, this. Your words are beautiful but still matter-of-fact. I don't know what you mean about your siggy being screwed up, it looks OK to me (apart from the missing "t" in but  . My sister's called siggy ...Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Impressive work. I like your extended metaphor. Who is Ziggy? Someone you know? I hope he/she becomes better again... Good poem. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
enjoyed this must one of the best come backs. were have you been if you don't mined me asking? well rather enjoyed the read and gald to see you read my crossroads again love version you should read the hate. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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